27 Jan offline edit review:
- 12.07- audio down (too echo)
- 12.20- trim down- see too much of a blank room
- Make the edits tighter
- 44.06- as chair turns do you have a close up of face?
- 46- audio seems to carry over to be louder overlay scene of 2 girls.
- 1.1.18- fade o black but continue the scream so we don’t see the aftermath of laughter.
- 1.05.13- any other distance shots?
- Interact shot 1.15.00 with 1.20.00 and crosscut to create tension.
- Why is 1.35.00 out of focus?
- Close up/mid shot/ shot reverse shots needed when ‘you’ see the ‘ghost’ figure to build suspense
- Where’s the audio in shot 1.40.00?
- Could you edit 1.45.00 (hand grabbing) to include jump cuts of characters walking and grabbing to demonstrate madness?
- Being grabbed would include audio response
- 1.50.00- audio too loud/cut shot sooner and overlay with audio of chocking
- Darker edit- too light
- Distinguish filming/ rehearsal.
We will correct the parts we have to do again and reshoot some scenes as well so we can address these issues.
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