Feedback from audience

We received feedback from one of our target audiences on the film so far and what we have edited.

27 Jan offline edit review:

• 12.07- audio down (too echo)
• 12.20- trim down- see too much of a blank room
• Make the edits tighter
• 44.06- as chair turns do you have a close up of face?
• 46- audio seems to carry over to be louder overlay scene of 2 girls.
• 1.1.18- fade o black but continue the scream so we don’t see the aftermath of laughter.
• 1.05.13- any other distance shots?
• Interact shot 1.15.00 with 1.20.00 and crosscut to create tension.
• Why is 1.35.00 out of focus?
• Close up/mid shot/ shot reverse shots needed when ‘you’ see the ‘ghost’ figure to build suspense
• Where’s the audio in shot 1.40.00?
• Could you edit 1.45.00 (hand grabbing) to include jump cuts of characters walking and grabbing to demonstrate madness?
• Being grabbed would include audio response
• 1.50.00- audio too loud/cut shot sooner and overlay with audio of chocking
• Darker edit- too light
• Distinguish filming/ rehearsal. 

We will correct the parts we have to do again and reshoot some scenes as well so we can address these issues.

Dates of filming and editing

Date	Time	Location	Activity	Equipment’s	Props	Personnel	Contingency
11/12/14	3:30-3:10	CTC Building	Test shots	Camera Tripod Microphone	Fake blood Scripts Watch	Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda) Actresses (all)	test shots of building (exterior)
22/12/14	10:30-13:00	CTC Building	Scene 2 and 4	Camera Tripod Microphone Light box	Fake blood Scripts Watch	Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda) Actresses (all)	Pan shots of exterior of CTC building.
6/01/15	11:00-12:30	Aspire Media Room	Offline edit	Mac computers Memory card		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)	Listen to sounds to include in footage.
12/01/15	09:00-10:30	Aspire Media Room	Offline  edit	Mac computers Memory card		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)
13/01/15	11:00- 12:30	Aspire Media Room	Offline edit	Mac computers Memory Card		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)
15/01/15	2:00-2:30	Music Studio	Radio Trailer		Scripts	Producer and director (Akfa)
19/01/15	09:50-10:40	Music Studio	Radio Trailer		Scripts	Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)
20/01/15	2:00-3:00	Harley Grove Playground	Scene 3	Camera Tripod Mike boom		Producer and director (Akfa) Actresses ( Shuma and Fathema)	Film Scene 5 in DST
23/01/15	13:30-3:00	Aspire Media Room	Offline edit	Mac computers Memory card		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)

  

Date	Time	Location	Activity	Equipment’s	Props	Personnel	Contingency
27/01/15	11:00-12:40	Aspire-Media Room	Offline Editing	Mac computer Memory card		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)
3/02/15	11:00-12:40	Aspire-Media Room	Offline Editing	Mac computer Memory card		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)
10/02/15	11:00-12:40	Aspire-Media Room	Offline Editing	Mac computer Memory card		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)
15/03/15	12:40-1:40	DST	Scene 5	Camera Tripod Microphone Light box		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)	Filming
6/03/15	3:10-4:30	Harley Grove	Scene	Camera Tripod Microphone Light box		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)	Reshooted this scene because it wasn’t in focus
9/03/15	3:10-5:00	Harley Grove	3Scene 1	Camera Tripod Microphone Light box		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda)	Filming
10/03/15	12:40-1:30	Aspire-Media Room	Offline Editing	Mac computer Memory card		Producers and directors ( Akfa & Mahmuda	Added music and sound effects to film

letters of permission

Talent contracts

Scenes that need to be filmed

Scenes that need to be filmed:

Film a close up shot of Mallory’s face

Close up/mid shot/reverse shots-needed for when ‘you’ see the ‘ghost’ to build up suspense.

Jump cuts of characters walking and grabbing to demonstrate madness.

Film the beginning bit when they go into the building and have a tour. 

Film the scene when Mallory kills Fatemah

End scene-DST hall