Effects made to Mallory

We have added effects in the scene when the protagonist is seen going down the stairs after meeting with the students, the filter of a cctv camera look was added to show how she is seeing everything and shows her control over them.



We used a light red filter on a scene when Mallory is seen watching Fatemah from above. This tells the audience that the protagonist is about to strike. 

A blue filter was also used when Fatemah is seen outside to give a chilly atmosphere which is matched to the sound effect of the wind. This is also evident in the radio trailer at the beginning.

Sounds effects & Music

Adding sound effects & Music:

For my film I added a lot of sound effects and music to make some of the scenes scarier as this hints the audience whats to happen for example the build up of suspense suggests something bad is about to happen such as in my film, when Mallory walks up to the camera and covers it with her hand with the upbeat music in the background connoting the suspense, I downloaded the music from royalty free and used audacity to cut and delete some of the parts to the music that isn't needed as well as paste multiple parts if i wanted to play again. 

Feedback of film so far

Feedback:

We let our target audience see the film so far and we got them to mark each category out of 5 so we can we which part needed improvement on.

Above: This shows the amendments we are going to make to the film and who is responsible for them.  

From the feedback we received most of our audience said they liked the camera angles, shots movements and composition however they said that the use of sounds need to be worked on such as effects and music. also our sub-genre needs to be more obvious so we need to add effects when Mallory appears so the audience know that she is a ghost. 

Poster design Ideas

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Radio trailer plan

Edited version:

Evidence: Recording our radio trailer in the music studio

Radio trailer plan

Voice: Inspired by true events.
Sound: Wind blowing and trees rustling.
Habiba screaming: As she gets dragged by Mallory.
Member of audience: She looks so scary
Fatema: Maybe she disappeared like you wanted her to in your script
Member of audience: Such a big twist. So unexpected.
Mallory: She awaits your arrival
Sound: 3 ticks of the watch
Sound: Cupboard creaking
Naimah: Who are you?
Whisper: Coming soon

Sounds we will include:
Wind blowing 


Screaming


Clock ticking


Cupboard creaking

Mallory film inspiration